viernes, 31 de agosto de 2012
He was born in 1910 the day the great war started. He was a very rich person that was mean to everyone and the power to travel through time. He was always making things that only benefited him and usually liked to cause misery to others. Had many futuristic machines that helped him with everything and was helping the axis by providing them with weapons from the future so that he could become really powerful person . But he hadn't found the love of his life so he was alone and everybody was afraid of him because if he had a fight with someone he just prevented them from being born. But he had one weakness which was That he could only use his power for 10 minutes and had to wait 10 hours to use it again because he had to bend timeand space so it took a lot of energy.
He was born in 1918 the day the great war ended. He was a good hearted person who worked as a police in London but when the WWII started they used him as a spy. He was very useful in there because he could freeze everything he wanted. He had a loving wife and kids, which sadly came without powers. He could freeze armies in seconds so they always won the battles which angered the nazis. But he had one weakness which was bread. When he saw i5 he paralyzed until it was 5 meters away
miércoles, 29 de agosto de 2012
What would my superpower be?
If I had a superpower it would be to travel through time. This would be my super power because with it you an become the most powerful person not of earth but of the whole world. I could do things that benefited me but also that benefited the earth and everything in it like humans.
I would use to travel to the past and invest money on stocks that I would know would grow a lot and invent companies like google before the original creators and become a billionaire. I would become one because I would know which companies would become the biggest and which would go broke.
I would also travel to the future to prevent catastrophes but I would not change the past because it would alter the present. Not even to prevent a world war because if I did, many great things could not happen and maybe change something so that may prevent me from being born.
I would also go and see what really happened to things that we are not sure like the size of the Persian army when the attacked Thermopylae or the real cause of Hitlers death. Or even Jesus to see if we have been lie all this time.
I would also bring back relics and paintings that are very significant to the world and open a museum or bring some that are not as important but would be destroyed like the Jesus painting that an old lady ruined in Spain. Also some of very important painters like Da Vinci or Galileo's text before they get destroyed.
With this power I could make a Utopia by destroying any kind of disease by traveling to the future and bringing back the cure. I would do this to save many lives of people that may be important or be significant to the world.
I could also go in search for answers that have been bothering us for centuries and why are we here just by traveling to the past and looking at it with my own eyes or looking at researches in the future that would help us understand better why are we here.
So I would be richer and more powerful than anybody else that has or will exist. Everybody would love me and I could have whatever I desired and whenever I did. So for me this is wh it would be the world's best super power.
Readers Blog for Tablets IV and V
This is a very short part of the book that tells us how Enkidu and Gilgamesh went through the mountains, into the cedar forest and finally killed the demon. It has almost no description at all about the battle nor the mountains or the woods. I think it should be more descriptive because if not you don't really know what happens and how did it happen so fast.
Also it does not help much that half or even more of that part of the book is very repetitive like when Gilgamesh had the dreams and Enkidu told him they were fortunate I thought I was reading the same part because it is exactly the same dialogue and the same setting saying that they liked 50 leagues in 1 day for 3 days, which would be a 3 week walk for an ordinary person.
The book also shows us that even though Gilgamesh is the most powerful man of all he is a really sensitive and scary cat person because he is always scared when he enters the woods and the one that does all ghe work to help them survie is Enkidu by finding the watersprings and a good place to camp. It also shows us that even if Enkidu has no parents or isn't civilized he is the wisest of the 2.
It doesn't matter if it is the first story ever written, I think it should be a little more descriptive and not look like if a 9 year old had narrated because it does not catch my attention and it looks like a really simple story.
miércoles, 22 de agosto de 2012
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